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If I base my success on opportunities lost
Than I may as well quit while I’m ahead
Failure doesn’t exist when you’re dead.
Cross my arms, and fall into bed.

You have nothing to offer me
When I’ve lived in indifference for so long.
Today while looking through the classified ads
I remembered I don’t have any skills
Just mounds and mounds of unidentified pills
One, two, three, four
One pop, two pop, three pop, seventy more!

Oh, I would kill to be witty,
After a burst of sarcasm, silence could never be louder
And darling you can have it all now, because I don’t want it
But I’m so angry that I can’t fucking see
And I’m so full of hate that all I can do is bleed

And here’s another rhyming piece of me
That makes me close my eyes, pull my hair and scream.
No one ever gets the best
Only what happens to be left.
©2007-2009 ~prepaidestiny
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:icondawneatsdishsoap:
Wow, I think I shit myself reading this.

I don't know how that was ever supposed to sound like a nice thing to say, but I swear it was intended in a good way.

I love this, and it is a well earned favorite.
:icondawneatsdishsoap:
And my first comment, didn't rhyme if you thought it did <3
:icondevinrichard:
I like it!

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More Deviant, more Angelic, more Aggresive than ever...
:iconprepaidestiny:
I think that that is the most amazing compliment ever! I feel honored. Ha.

Thank you doll.
:iconprepaidestiny:
Nope, I don't see the rhyme. (:
:iconnotrem:
Your writing is amazing, dahling. I haven't written crap since the psychward, all I've been doing is drawing. I love it. I love you. You're amazing.

Anne
:iconprepaidestiny:
Thank you so much... Writing is harder for me than it use to be...But I'm glad I still do it.

Youuuu are amazing. I think you should try to draw me someday. I think it would be magnificant. I would buy it from you, because i know it would be worth it.
:iconcut-devil4:
ohh..this is cool. loves it.

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~someone once told me that life was a rollercoaster.
~ someone else told me that it doesn't slow down until you reach the end, a rollercoaster that is.
~I want to know what happens when the rollercoaster is going so fast that you can't feel anything any

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